36-37: Kartography, Ash
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36: Kartography by Kamila Shamsie
If you've been following this comm for a while, you'll know that I love the novels of Kamila Shamsie. Now that I've read Kartography and tracked down In the City by the Sea, I should soon be in the rare position of having read all of a novelist's published works, which is kind of cool.
Kartography is similar to Shamsie's other novels: it's all about a privileged young Karachi woman who bumps up against the boundaries of the bubble she's been living in. It's most similar to Salt and Saffron, though the dazzling verbiage and the virtuoso tangents are slightly more subdued (and a good thing, too). In some ways it's less brave than Salt and Saffron, in that the love story at the heart of the novel is about two Karachiites with equal degrees of privilege; but in other ways it's a lot braver, because where Salt and Saffron could only gesture at the lives of the less-privileged with a "we don't hang out with boys from Liaquatabad and you know perfectly well why", Kartography shows us quite a few vividly-realised scenes of the lives of the people who live outside the bubble. They're all seen from the point of view of the privileged youngsters, but they're intense and detailed enough to feel real and shocking.
In short, if you like Shamsie's other novels, you'll like Kartography; if you don't, you won't. It has all of Shamsie's characteristic virtues (sparkling, witty prose, well-rounded characters, utterly convincing relationships, sharp insight on privilege, deep love for Karachi in particular and Pakistan in general) and flaws (main character is distinctly self-absorbed, ending is somewhat rushed, sometimes she seems to be having so much fun with her dazzling prose that she loses sight of the plot).
37: Ash by Malinda Lo
When I think about Ash, I find myself thinking as much about what it is not as what it is. It is not an epic; it is not the kind of fantasy that has dense, detailed world-building; it is not even a lesbian version of the Cinderella story (though it comes close, and that's as near you're going to get to a high-concept pitch version). It is a fairy tale; and it is about fairy tales, as well; and it is a love story, and a coming-of-age story. It is, at times, beautifully written -- evocative and emotionally intense.
I want to preface what I'm about to say with this: I very much enjoyed it, and will be looking forward to Malinda Lo's future works. But... I found myself a little frustrated by it at times. I read it in chunks, leaving it for days at a time, and I knew that part of the reason why I didn't read it in a more-or-less continuous flow was that I could anticipate that the resolution/climax/ending would be disappointing. And it was. I don't know how I could see that disappointment coming, when the beginning and the middle were so lovely -- sometimes positively exquisite. I suppose there was something about the way Lo had set up the world that made me suspect she hadn't planted enough seeds in the early stages to produce a satisfying fruit for the ending. Ash is not a straightforward retelling of the Cinderella story -- there are several variations played on the theme, and the fact that Ash's beloved is a woman is not the most important. The nature of the "fairy godmother" is more crucial to the plot, and to the resolution; and the way this gets played out is a little too simple, and not nearly surprising enough. It hits an unsatisfying middle ground of being neither simple enough to be mythic nor complex enough to be novelistic. And yet, I do rather like what Lo does with the fairy tales in her world, and the way Ash's story seems to be taking place in a world that wants a Cinderella story, and isn't (quite) going to get one.
If you've been following this comm for a while, you'll know that I love the novels of Kamila Shamsie. Now that I've read Kartography and tracked down In the City by the Sea, I should soon be in the rare position of having read all of a novelist's published works, which is kind of cool.
Kartography is similar to Shamsie's other novels: it's all about a privileged young Karachi woman who bumps up against the boundaries of the bubble she's been living in. It's most similar to Salt and Saffron, though the dazzling verbiage and the virtuoso tangents are slightly more subdued (and a good thing, too). In some ways it's less brave than Salt and Saffron, in that the love story at the heart of the novel is about two Karachiites with equal degrees of privilege; but in other ways it's a lot braver, because where Salt and Saffron could only gesture at the lives of the less-privileged with a "we don't hang out with boys from Liaquatabad and you know perfectly well why", Kartography shows us quite a few vividly-realised scenes of the lives of the people who live outside the bubble. They're all seen from the point of view of the privileged youngsters, but they're intense and detailed enough to feel real and shocking.
In short, if you like Shamsie's other novels, you'll like Kartography; if you don't, you won't. It has all of Shamsie's characteristic virtues (sparkling, witty prose, well-rounded characters, utterly convincing relationships, sharp insight on privilege, deep love for Karachi in particular and Pakistan in general) and flaws (main character is distinctly self-absorbed, ending is somewhat rushed, sometimes she seems to be having so much fun with her dazzling prose that she loses sight of the plot).
37: Ash by Malinda Lo
When I think about Ash, I find myself thinking as much about what it is not as what it is. It is not an epic; it is not the kind of fantasy that has dense, detailed world-building; it is not even a lesbian version of the Cinderella story (though it comes close, and that's as near you're going to get to a high-concept pitch version). It is a fairy tale; and it is about fairy tales, as well; and it is a love story, and a coming-of-age story. It is, at times, beautifully written -- evocative and emotionally intense.
I want to preface what I'm about to say with this: I very much enjoyed it, and will be looking forward to Malinda Lo's future works. But... I found myself a little frustrated by it at times. I read it in chunks, leaving it for days at a time, and I knew that part of the reason why I didn't read it in a more-or-less continuous flow was that I could anticipate that the resolution/climax/ending would be disappointing. And it was. I don't know how I could see that disappointment coming, when the beginning and the middle were so lovely -- sometimes positively exquisite. I suppose there was something about the way Lo had set up the world that made me suspect she hadn't planted enough seeds in the early stages to produce a satisfying fruit for the ending. Ash is not a straightforward retelling of the Cinderella story -- there are several variations played on the theme, and the fact that Ash's beloved is a woman is not the most important. The nature of the "fairy godmother" is more crucial to the plot, and to the resolution; and the way this gets played out is a little too simple, and not nearly surprising enough. It hits an unsatisfying middle ground of being neither simple enough to be mythic nor complex enough to be novelistic. And yet, I do rather like what Lo does with the fairy tales in her world, and the way Ash's story seems to be taking place in a world that wants a Cinderella story, and isn't (quite) going to get one.